Poet in the Making

Poetry!! Something I am trying my VERY hardest to get better at ;) Here's a poem I wrote about the summer of 2011! This is the summer we did Annie, and I met my AMAZING "orphans", as we call each other. It's titled The Summer of Our Dreams. I know, kinda cliche, but oh well ;) Here it is: (Feel free to put CONSTRUCTIVE criticism in the little comment box, but please don't put something mean in there that will turn me into a depressed blob ;) )

The Summer of Our Dreams <3

 The grass between our toes
The ring around the Rosie
The moonlight bathing the backyard
The campouts and the memories

Running through sprinklers
 Leaping from tree to tree
Singing as loud as a mockingbird
Falling into the glassy surface of an empty pool

When we danced until 2 am in the morning.
When we painted our nails and laughed hysterically at nothing.
When we dressed up like celebrities and talked in funny accents
When I found my best friends
When I had the best summer of my life

There ya go!! So as my first writing post on here, I'm pretty proud of it, especially when you consider the fact I wrote it in like maybe 10 minutes. It just kinda popped into my head, and I didn't really edit it, and I also put it in the notes section in my iPod, so please excuse any typos made by auto correct!! Thanks for reading!